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Fundraiser-Red clothes Day High Cliff school.

The student committee thinks that everyone at our school should help the High Cliff Firefighters raise money to buy gym equipment.

We feel that firefighters do a very important and dangerous job in our community.

Firstly,firefighters rescue people trapped in burning buildings.

Secondly,they put out fierce bush fires in summer

Thirdly,they rescue people trapped in cars at road accidents

Finally,firefighters teach us about how to prevent fire and what to do when there is a fire.

The High Cliff Firefighters need to keep fit so they can do their work properly.

Come to school dressed in red clothes on friday 21 May and make a donation.

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