CREATIVE WRITTING

Thank you teoro for spending time with us.I really appreciate what you have learnt us.I learned how to do the moari koru and the cool designs.Thank You for everything.

Love jamal.

Thank you WHetu.

Creative writting.

Past the jungle over the bridge under the river and on top of the trees there was a fountain of holy water.The legends say if you drink the water you will become young again.People thought it was just a tale but there was only one man that thought it was real.He went to maps store and bought one .He went on a boat to indonesia.When he got of the boat he went to the forest and started looking for the fountain.He looked north he try west and he even tried south and east.He got lost in the middle of the wood.KKK RRR,What was that.When it his 7.00 something popped out of the ground.It was the fountain.He drank some water of the fountain and guess what he become younger so he bring some more water in a lunch box.So when he gets old he will just drink it.So his life will just move on for now.

Fix The Sentence

The sentences below need fix the spelling and grammar mistakes.

the cat ran akross the road to get to da other sid
The cat ran across the road to get to the other side.

the old man went to the supermarket to by sum food
The old man went to the supermarket to buy some food

i miss goin 2 skool and seeing all my frends
I miss going to school and seeing all my friends.

my favourite subject at school is writting.
My favourite subject at school is writing.

da bird flew throw the sky and landed on a tree
The bird flew through the sky and landed on a tree.

i whent 4 a walk wif my family to get sum fresh ear
I went for a walk with my family to get some fresh air.

i whent to da park and saw lots of kidds playin
I went to the park and saw lots of kids playing.

i went to da movies and got popkorn to eat
I went to the movies and got popcorn to eat.

i hav been playing lots of fun gams with my family at home
I have been playing lots of fun games with my family at home.

i luv doing werk on my chromebook
I love doing work on my chromebook.

My picture about the earth

I hope you like my picture and Make sure dont litter when you are anywhere.

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Catch It!

On a hot day in the sahara desert there lived some cute meerkats. They slept in a hole for the night. They woke up on a fine morning in their hole. One meerkat popped his head out of the hole and saw a fruit hanging on one of the trees. They left it there to grow a little bit more until they saw a vultures shadow. The meerkats got shocked when they saw the shadow, they stopped until when they looked back the vulture took the fruit. The meerkats were jealous so one meerkat said ATTACK! They ran and chased the vulture to get back the fruit. One of them jumped up on a vultures leg but then he had no more grip so the rest of the meerkats made a ladder.  The big bird flew high up in the sky. The meerkats and the vulture flew past the trees and past the big rocks until the meerkats let go. The vulture laughed his lungs of until when he looked on his other leg where the fruit was it was gone!. The fruit was flying down with the meerkats. The meerkat holding the fruit was pushed by the vulture. The meerkats started working in a team to keep the fruit away. The vulture went right in the middle until the fruit fell. The vulture went down and caught it but he went straight into a wall.  The meerkats caught it and dropped kicked it as high as possible until it smacked right on the ground. And they stand there for a while.

Spring Writing

As I was walking, I can smell the fresh spring air in my nose as I was walking.I can feel the warmth  on my body and I can smell the fresh juicy veggies and fruits. I can smell the flowers blooming and butterflies growing. I feel so happy to see the colourful plants  surrounding me.I can smell the fresh flowers bloom. It is super peaceful and nice to hear the birds chirping.I can see the glittering pink flowers falling down on me. I love this day and what a beautiful sight and view. I wish I could see it again.

I heard a bang....

I heard a bang from downstairs, but I was home alone .Everyday I would go outside and look at the sea in the distance and sometimes I would see waves crashing on the rocks as I watched. But suddenly a pirate ship came towards me.

I was scared to open the door so I left it close. The pirate got angry standing next to the door so instead they broke it. The pirate went upstairs to look for the kid. He saw the kid and grabbed him and put him in a bag. Later on they were at a tropical place were there was heaps of monkeys and trees with  bananas on them. 

They got the boy out and left him there. Three days went by and he was bored there so he decided to make a boat so he can go back home. He found his home and he was glad to be back home. He told his mum dad to not leave him ever again at home.

Creative writting

The girl was walking through the forest, when she realized it was starting to get dark. It got darker and darker until it was night time. The girl was walking around the creepy forest until she realized that she was lost. Next, she suddenly she sees a light. Then she remembered her way home.

Creative writing

One beautiful morning a girl awoke in the forest. When she woke up she saw a bright and amazing view. She went walking around the forest when she saw a dog. It was walking around. She loves the sound of the birds singing in the distance. She was glad she had company and it was her dog. What she saw that day, was amazing.