my creative writting.

Once upon a time there lived a little boy  in a brown small house with his nana and his name is jack.He live next to a forest named albrada.Hed always asks his nana can we go to the forest but she'd always sad no.He thought it was just a forest but then he thought that his nana was crazy about the forest.So he thought he would go to the forest.So at night he went to the forest and he didn't see any predators there but little did he know a little doll was following him.ZHe thought about his nana was saying something about this doll named mary.she started singing he was scared LA LA LA LA LA.I was scared of my surrounded with the doll Until i saw lying on the tree sleeping.He ran as fast as he can but then when he looked back she was gone.She looked at him and said DO YOU WANT TO PLAY WITH ME.He did not want to so he ran all the way and he got there and then the doll disappeared but he ran to his bed. But little did you know she was standing beside his door looking at him waiting till he wakes up.To Be CONTINUED.